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FACT - More than 80% of Your Ad Effectiveness
Comes Down to Your Headline

What if you were using the wrong words?

Add up the investment that goes into an advertisement, catalogue, press release and more – it’s usually a sizeable investment. Sometimes $1,000's or even $10,000's of dollars - not to mention the time!

Big Problem I See Almost Daily
# 1 -People stay INSIDE their industry and quickly become limited and stale. The ideas come from a very limited circle. The pool of proven, tested headlines and ad copy is so small that companies continue with mediocre results.

# 2 - Companies are willing to invest $10,000 up to as much as $50,000 but won't spend a measley couple of grand to get their ad copy critiqued.

Many businesses don't understand that master copywriters are masters of psychology AND sales flow. You often get more than just an ad critiqued - by accident they find loopholes in your entire sales process

Solution
Have your marketing critiqued so you don’t send it out with any glaring holes that can kill response rates, sales and profits.

“Copywriting Critiques can be comprehensive or simple overviews – but either way they can save you a lot of money… and a tonne of stress, confusion and possible embarrassment!”

Note - "I once witnessed an ad just about to go to print and they left off the phone number and how to contact the company altogether - simple mistake that would have cost more than $10,000 in printing alone - let alone the downtime thorugh lost sales and revenue." - Scott Groves

Copy critique from a “Master Eyeball” can include –
Headlines – advice and re-writes
Layout
Offer strength
Color Psychology
Appeals and Buying Motives
Action Verbs vs. Dribble Writing that bores the shit out of readers
Copy Connectors to increase flow and momentum through copy
Call to Action Analysis – for simplicity, flow and urgency

Plus more than 15 other KEY areas that can DRAMATICALLY affect your results

Critique Fees
$500 plus GST per A4 page or smaller
Regular clients submitting monthly work for review will receive discounted fees

Credit Card over the phone is accepted - and work can be submitted by mail or email
Please allow 72 Hours Minimum for Work to be Complete.

Your completed work will include a report with details as to what changes were made and why. All testing should have written briefs you can attach to each filed marketing piece so you can track the mindset, appeals and specific words and phrases you are testing with your market.

Enter Your Information Below to Speak Directly with Me About Your Marketing Piece You Want Critiqued

I Will Personally Phone You in the Next Few Days to Discuss Your Challenges and Goals with Your Specific Marketing

Please - No Time Wasters - You Can See My Fees on this Page. If You Don't Have the Money Do NOT Expect a Nice Response If You Think You Can Pick My Brain for Free

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